Dude i love this poem

i have deep obsessions with the moon and rain

and i think ur poem rocks

i mean "tattooed(sp) to the black night sky" AMAZING

i mean the use of tattoo is awesome

and "blurring my view to the outside" is a great lead up to the wondering part of it, like its kinda i cant really see the outside and cant understand it(but thats only my opinion about that line)

and i love the wondering about yourself and the world(srry i know this is a really long comment)

and the ending "another day of wondering begins" like its just something casual in ur like that isnt casual in most peoples

i love it!!!! 5/5

Well, I'm not going to comment on every word because it was, how do i out it, TO GOOD FOR WORDS!!! There!

I really like this one I can really picture it!