Great poem! I like your style keep it up!

It's beautiful Michael:)
You are good at the dark ones!

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

Think your word choice could have been better but otherwise it was ok.

Wow! this is amazing!

You did an awesome job with this form.

Sing serenity from blue bayou,
Across the tranquil mist to you.
Play your music to my soul,
Caressing, finessing,
Love crafting us whole;
Sharing our lives,
Forever
Foretold
Of

The first part of this gives that feeling of such love. Great imagery.

The
Tortured,
Polished death
In deep reflect,
See the angel's die;
Such pleasure brings measure
To the demons' bleeding eyes.
Witness them scheme with loaded gun
Their Evil slaughter, murderous fun.

Then the second part just hits you with chills. Such creepy visions from your words.

I really enjoyed the way you flipped this piece.
Excellent job!
Take care
Cindy

Hello Michael.

I thought I'd delve into your library today and guess what I found? Another made up form. :)

No, this is great and actually, I HAVE heard of this form. As Cindy points out, the way this flips from a soothing, loving read to a second part filled with dark imagery is clever and creative.

Take care,
Ben