Comments : IF EVER by dian

  • 13 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Very nice wtiren , but the capitalasation is not a good idea

  • 13 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    A very sweet well thought out poem it flowed reasonably well, with a few mistakes but otherwise was very nice to read well done

    Grant

  • 13 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Wow! very sweet. I like it. NIce , awesome job =)!!!