Comments : Breathless eskimo kisses

  • 11 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    This looks like a love poem written straight from the heart, Tabi:)
    Very sweet lines and a very genuine feel to it!
    I enjoyed reading it very much:)

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 11 years ago

    by emovampire

    This poem is very well written and touching gr8 job 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Courtney Hough

    I LOVE IT!!!!!!
    Wondering in your eyes &
    anticipating your next touch.
    Mesmerized by your smile &
    there's no need to say much.

    is my fav part................its so true when u find the one like that

  • 11 years ago

    by 4EvErMaKeBeLiEvE

    Wow. That was an amaizng poem. It's been a while since I have read something that good and so unique. It really did take my breath away. It was Beautiful. Kepp uo the great work.

  • 11 years ago

    by Brittany Leann

    So this one is pretty much amazing. :)
    I really like the rhyme sheme and how it flows. Its full of feeling as well which makes it even better.

  • 11 years ago

    by angelface

    I loved the last stanza ..
    hit it home in that one...:)
    good job

  • 11 years ago

    by Whisper

    Amazing!

    Absolutelyy fantastic.

    I felt every stanza, every word.

    I'm speechless. that was soo good.

    <3

  • 11 years ago

    by FallingAngel

    Amazing, great job. You did wonderful on the rhyming scheme and it was very heartfelt. It was a pleasure to read, your an amazing poet. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    This poem was very touching, I understood what the you was saying. Though i'm a guy, i still feel that reassurance of love by someone you adore is a great key to an awesome relationship. (5/5)

  • 11 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Take the & out. They take away from the poem.

    I liked this poem it is cute. I gave it 5/5. I saw nothing else wrong with it.

  • 11 years ago

    by I love you always and today

    Aww usually love poems are hard for most to do and that was great i hope u keep writing cause your like a natural good luck

  • 10 years ago

    by Twistd StoRY

    I lovee it! it was so cute, and romantic. it made me think of my signicficant other the whole time =] 5/5