I LIKED THAT D@MN IT WAS GOOD IT WAS SAD AND I CAN RELATE TO IT THANKZ FOR THE COMMENT LOVE MUCH
HOLLY

hey how are ya? i thought your poem was really good. thanx for commenting on my poem meant alot to me.. i think your a pretty good writter.. i hope to see some more of your work..

My whole world has colapsed,
fell on top of me.
I can't see light,
and can hardly breathe.

i thought you ending was very good..

wow......wow..... that was a GREAT poem, another brilliant read, loved it to pieces like i do all your work, keep it up, i totally related to it and felt it....wow.... really really i loved it!

thanks for commenting on my stuff too!
love
~nikki~