If only it would be that simple, ha ha!
Do I get your biceps when I eat the stuff??

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

Very creative senryu. Thought provoking piece. Can be read a few different ways :)
Great job!
Take Care
Cindy

First of all chocolate. MMMMM. lol I love chocolate haha.

Anyways

I liked this poem, I've always admired senryus putting words together to make a very short poem, as well as making it make sense is a hard thing to do. Props for that. But the way you described chocolate made me feel as if i was eating some, or just imaging watching how it looks. Were you eating some or had some in front of you while writing this? Lol

I love dark chocclate!
This was beautiful. Each word was packed with meaning. Loved this style...you oh so talented poet.

Well done.
*5/5*