by Katie
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The rhyming to this story is very effective. I like it. Great job. |
by JaM
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I feel you have done a wonderful job with this write. The title is very interesting and definitely appropriate. I enjoyed the words you chose to use and I love the concept of the poem. It is very true and provides perspective on relationships and people. It is also very moving. Great work. |
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Soul mates speak a common language of the heart, |
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"However in the end it falls on you, |