This is beautiful. I LOVE THE ORGANIZATION OF THIS!!! It's the most creative I've ever seen a poem organized. In the beginning I was thinking there was no meter to it or any scheme but I realized you used the same set of words to end every line in each stanza and which ever word you ended a stanza on you started the next with. But very beautiful in emotion and a very good story of feelings that comes through. Your girlfriend is going to love this. Happy birthday to her and congrats on this excellent work. 5/5

I absolutely love the type of poems, and i love love' poems. you were very creative with your words and the way you expressed yourself and how you feel was truly amazing. the emotion that cam from this piece was magical, and i think she will absolutely fall in love with this poem. 5/5 happy b'day to her too. nice work

This was a great devotional poem the images were very wellplayed out the flow was good and you seemed to keep the reader from begining to end Plot121

Awwww, that was amazing. She will love it, girls melt for poems like this. Good luck with her you care for her a lot. Great flow and imagery, it all seemed to be in there quite seamlessly.

Wow...Dude i must say that was one of the most amazing poems that i've ever read....i just like how u express ur love into a words that gets peoples Attention and sure she is just a lucky gurl too my freind...well keep it up the good work
much luv
-Moha...

Wow, thats beautiful

OMG!, this poem is beautiful. i made my boyfriend read this poem. we both agree that love is a white rose. i hope taht your girlfriend love that poem.

i have a love peom about a red rose.