Wow, that was such a grueling piece, your words were truly haunting, they were like daggers stabbing the reader as they read. I loved this piece, it was amazing!!! wow, your images were so real and your poem in general was just unbelievably amazing!!!!!!! 5/5

You go from warm and touching to cold and harsh. A versatile man in deed. Another great write a lot on the scary side. I loved it haha.

Haha This is one haunting poem and it's going into my favorites. I'm not quite sure of what the meaning is though but still it is so powerful. In my eyes when I was reading this poem I sensed a lot of anger but that could just be my point of view. once again you have shocked me I am so happy I came across your poetry. It is truly amazing.
Outstanding write.
xxxxxx Mucho Love
Roxy