The Beauty..
Of impossibility devours me
Leaving no choice but to surrender
Of heart-break, so painfully
Crashing and burning to justify
Of lonelines..just let me be
Hiding in secrets alone to bear
Of you..is all I see...

Wow i really loved this poem, your words were truly haunting and really reflected the pain of not being able to be with the person you love. i know exactly how you feel, i was with this amazing guy who i really loved but i became really depressed for about two weeks as i lost my brother who i was extremely close to and my boyfriend said he just couldn't cope with the depression and so left me for another girl if only people could understand the pain which they cause others and how they hurt others. your words were so powerful and i am sure that a lot of people can really relate to you. great job, keep it up and take car1!!

Im speechless! amazing work! 5/5