A very sincere, heartfelt write. It is hard to lose someone, especially if we think we might be to blame. Good rhymes.

"And until my dieing day I promise u the world & to be loyal & true."
- 'dieing' should be 'dying'.

I've missed your poetry so much lately; it's good to have you back. (: This poem was nothing short of amazing. You still have an amazing talent with writing.

5.5
Take care,
Stephanie.

I know that feeling and can really relate. Great poem, more to come?

Touching and well written.
Great poem.
keep up the good work.

Hello d0ra
I'm so sorry hun :S I didn't know you & harry broke up, haven't heard from you in ages !!!!
Miss you a lot

this was so teary, I felt every word you wrote..of course not the same way you feel but at least I know this pain !!
I'm really glad you're back to writing, believe me it''ll make you feel a lot better, and you're a good poetess =]]

write on babe
God bless you
I'm here if you need anything xxx

Prey should be PRAY

the thing i like about this poem is how actually the flow of words is easy , and the rhyming just happen smoothly with no effort

i can feel how deeep you want that guy and your feelings are intense!!!

i can only admire your ability to express!!

you deserve my vote
5/5

Aww..this poem was written so beautifully and the emotion is just incredible. It's hard when lovers are so distant from each other.. I honestly know how that feels and I hate it.

anyways, 5/5 from me, definitly goin on my favorites!

How can I say this...? I'm feeling your poem. Right now. I can keep reading it over and over again and still want to read it again.

5/5

This!..is so touching...i'd say..dis is the best..the best poem from all your poems...it shows how deeply u mean wat u wrote...every word of it!..i wonder if sum1 would eva write sumthin 4 me!...but...5/5.

Beautiful.
5/5. Em