Comments : I'd Rather be with You

  • 12 years ago

    by Deana

    A very sincere, heartfelt write. It is hard to lose someone, especially if we think we might be to blame. Good rhymes.

  • 12 years ago

    by Stephanie

    "And until my dieing day I promise u the world & to be loyal & true."
    - 'dieing' should be 'dying'.

    I've missed your poetry so much lately; it's good to have you back. (: This poem was nothing short of amazing. You still have an amazing talent with writing.

    5.5
    Take care,
    Stephanie.

  • 12 years ago

    by troy

    I know that feeling and can really relate. Great poem, more to come?

  • 12 years ago

    by Max Krakers

    Touching and well written.
    Great poem.
    keep up the good work.

  • 12 years ago

    by Nee

    Hello d0ra
    I'm so sorry hun :S I didn't know you & harry broke up, haven't heard from you in ages !!!!
    Miss you a lot

    this was so teary, I felt every word you wrote..of course not the same way you feel but at least I know this pain !!
    I'm really glad you're back to writing, believe me it''ll make you feel a lot better, and you're a good poetess =]]

    write on babe
    God bless you
    I'm here if you need anything xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Prey should be PRAY

    the thing i like about this poem is how actually the flow of words is easy , and the rhyming just happen smoothly with no effort

    i can feel how deeep you want that guy and your feelings are intense!!!

    i can only admire your ability to express!!

    you deserve my vote
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by HvN

    Aww..this poem was written so beautifully and the emotion is just incredible. It's hard when lovers are so distant from each other.. I honestly know how that feels and I hate it.

    anyways, 5/5 from me, definitly goin on my favorites!

  • 12 years ago

    by cLumsy

    How can I say this...? I'm feeling your poem. Right now. I can keep reading it over and over again and still want to read it again.

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Exostosis

    This!..is so touching...i'd say..dis is the best..the best poem from all your poems...it shows how deeply u mean wat u wrote...every word of it!..i wonder if sum1 would eva write sumthin 4 me!...but...5/5.

  • 11 years ago

    by Em

    Beautiful.
    5/5. Em