Comments : A very painful poem ( tasteless)

  • 15 years ago

    by HollywoodSmile

    Excekkent! hloy crap man, that was fricking awesome! i love the end, it reminded me of extasy. i love that the eyes are sown open, the lips are sown shut, and omgfg, i love the whole fricken thing, its very sadistic, very...idfk, amazing. nice work.

    --TheGothicAlbino

  • 14 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    May appeal to any Masochist in our ranks but not really my cup of tea although I think it is unique and very well put together. 5/5 Ray S