Wow your writing is very mature... Good use of words, and has a nice flow to it :) Something most of my poems lack lol
Thanks for your comment on my poem, even though I was just a tad shocked to read "would never leave a man alone, we are not to be trusted. " Lol even though you did say u were kidding... Hmm... I dont take advice from strangers anyway :)
Cute poem!
5/5