Sounds famillear
5/5
love the poem,its the raw truth
in highskool
too often this stuff happens

What really matters here and now
Is getting by and school
Now be pretty damnit, i said be pretty
Don't you want to be cool?

^^ It's scary because that's the actually expectations...i feel that every day, jesse..

Scene two is in your bathroom
While you're screaming at your mirror
Cause it can't make you pretty
Even through the makeup that you wear

^^ It's so damn HARD when you can't see that you're pretty...it's so stupidly hard because you try to cover it and ur failing and it's frustrating..

Well, now it's running down your cheeks
You'll never be pretty, you'll never be cool
I got a news flash, my precious
They see right through you

^^ That's how i feel when i get home..

In bright red lipstick,
You write an "I hate you"
To the mirror, to yourself
To your "friends" at school

^^ I've done that...

**stupid button..**

You were too drunk to remember
Not drunk enough to forget
Scene four is under lover boy
And above the party bed

^^ that stanza makes me think of our little monique..

Scene six is the bathroom
She�s screaming at the mirror
For making her so stupid
So weak in her tears

^^ I don't know what to say to this stanza. I think it was probably the strongest one to me...just because it's so relatable. You wrote it very well..

�They say that I'm worthless
Yeah, I knew that before
They tell me what I'm not
I tell them some more

^^ when you first showed me this stanza, i thought of the story surrounding it to be completely different. but it fits so perfectly here. once again...relatable...

i think that actually a lot of people can relate to this, regardless of who it's actually about. just beause...all the stupid feelings are so cliche. but you caught them beautifully, m'dear wesse.

5/5

I don't like jess...i think you'll now why. it's written very well though. and it seemed repetitive, but i think it was just you reminding the reader. idk though. good job.

Your such a good writter