It's beautiful.
I know what it's like to love someone and knowing that they might very well walk out the door, leaving you broken.

Great Job!

Your first poem! I am impressed, young lady:)
Your words are well chosen and the rhyming is great too.
Love is never easy and often there are many obstacles to conquer..but if both parties are commited anything is possible:)

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

5/5! U did a wonderful job keep me reading and wanting more! Very good 4 first peom. Keep it up.. Jessi please rate n comment mine too! Another thing not all poems have to have a flow or rhyme.. great work