LOVE IT. awesomeness!

Real good poem girl...i can relate a lot to somethin in it...strong words i love it! keep it up

Aww.. that was very sweet! i enjoyed reading that, the descriptions and imagery were beautiful.. and the rhymes worked well, great job!

For you I would every count every star above,
^ here, you should only have "every" after count not before as well

great job, very pleasurable read! 5/5

Awww !! this was really really sweet =D I enjoyed reading it, it was amazing. You`re a terrific writer, Ann Marie. Keep it up! 5/5

Samantha Hollywood

THe poem was sweet but you may want to add some new rhymes. Some of these are too typical when you could have better ones you thought of but maybe never wrote.