Comments : Heart of Stone

  • 15 years ago

    by Goodbye

    This is excellent! I am really astonished! Flow was awesome and wording. Wowowowow.

    I think this poem is one of your best ones so far. Really touching me a lot.

    Keep on writing. Always. :)

    May you have blessed last days of Ramadan. I will remember you in my prayers.

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Nothing to mend in a heart of stone
    The sword of truth is standing alone
    The balance of power sways too far
    Hope glimmering in a far away star

    ^^ somehow this stanza strikes me as so sad..Reading your poem I get the feeling you are going through some kind of ordeal...
    I hope you are doing alright..

    Take care,

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Very well written and the flow was great. It was extemely easy to read and the meaning intense.