I can see it soooo well. haha. i'll just take a thousand pictures and ruin your moments. :P

5/5

Hmm... I give you a big 5/5
You have a great talent.. I could picture everything.. I love, Love poems. This one was so optimistic and it was like, at that moment nothing could break your happiness and you've captured all of those great feelings forever, in the lines of your poem.
please keep writing