Hey
I liked your poem, it was good. It had a cool topic and it flowed well. Good job.
Love,

-Blue ^_~.

read a few of your poems. Theire pretty good, but theirs somewhat saddness in some of them.

It was one of the best poems I ever read

In my opinion the flow is odd. i love lines 5,6,7, and 8. oh and the last two. they are very good. and i love the topic and idea behind it. its beautiful

Really good

Yo im a christian!!!!ilove jesus!!!!
This is pretty amazing!!!!

O? angels hear my plea,
Please give grace to me.
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^^Liked those lines alot.

Again, You did a great job. Though the poems I've read so far are short, they're great. Keep up the fantastic work! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Ann Marie - the flow kind of messed me up a little on this poem. but the rhyming and theme was really nice. i think i kind of feel as you do. =D much thanks for your comments on my poetry.
keep this up!

Samantha Hollywood

It was short but very well penned, keep up the hard work and the writing will get better as you carry on writing
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Nice theme very different. I like the way you worded it and loved the final 2 lines. Again its just the rhythm fluctuating between rhyming and not.