Wow, I loved this! I didnt think I would because usally I like dark or depressing poems haha This is sort of uplifting...... My favourite line is \
"Sun does rise after the moon dies"
It reminds me of a Billy Talent song, with the lyrics being something like "Like a pawn can check mate a king" something something....
Cute poem!!!

P.s. You're a heaps talented writer... You can create a good flow, and also you stick closely to the basic writing rules like trying to have the same amount of syllables in each line... Something I find very hard to do haha but thats only because I never edit my poems, just left whatever come out :)

5/5

A perfectly good rap rant...