Like a sorceress, you cast a spell
You dent my ego by your simplicity
Enchanted by an optimistic charm
I feel bewitched by your tender beauty.

^^^Really very tender and caring words for your beloved one. I am sure she will appreciate this beautiful dedication:)

Blessings,

5/5 Ingrid

Very interesting piece you penned here. Thoroughly enjoyed reading.:)

Okay first of all, i'm thoroughly insulted that you would assume we don't know the definitions to your 'tough' vocabulary words.
also, i think that you shoud just let it flow instead of trying to cram in words that make it sound wrong and read unsmoothly.
third, who cares if someone doesnt understand a word let them figure it out for themselves. you should waist the poem space for needlss explanations of things they already should know.