Yet another wonderful poem from you.. well done. this is kinda different to the other stuff you've written, and it's really good. [i know exactly what you mean]
5/5

I really love how you portray the feeling of having to mask all the saddness and grief from someone, who may even be very close, because you do not know what may happen if they find out... will they get angry, will they support you, will they even care?

This is very beautiful, Makalah. I love it.
You are so talented...
and it amazes me...
you're only 12.

Take care of yourself, sweetheart.

love you very much.
Val

Very gd i feel like that everyday kkep on writenin