I loved how smooth the poem was, along with the word choice. Very good!

-Andrew

It was very good.Nice job.5/5

Very good you've got the talent keep up the work ive read a few of yours good on you

5/5

Very good you've got the talent keep up the work ive read a few of yours good on you

5/5

Very very good short and sweet brilent write!

xoxoxox

*Clap, Clap*.. Very nice. You should check out my poem "A little deeper, a little less". It gives off the same vibe as this one here did. 5/5.

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Tiffany </3

I love this!! It's really great, and the words flow together really well!!