hi, I love your poem, you got talent..
I gave you a 5.
please check out my poems and comment and rate.. I would be very happy..

hugs and kisses from me =)

Great poem for a 15 yr old. Leave it as it is and look back on it in a few years and then you will know what to add.
Cathy

Well it's going pretty good so far.
I will come back when you are finished. I can tell it's going to be great, how can it not be?

so I rated it a 5 already

-David

It's a good start hun ^_^