Amazing poem and yet so sad at the same time. It is really so well written that sympathy fills my heart and mind when I think how blind we can become when we think we have found the one. Yet it is always good to know that there are others out there that do care - it depicts that there is some hope in life.
The ending was truly tragic and yet at the same time we have all walked along those lines where the person that we care about just makes us cry.

Excellent work! Keep it up and this does not deserve anything less than 5/5.

I love this poem! Good job! this so explains my life right now!!!