Well this was certainly dark haha. it had me cracking up to be honest, a very good poem though. great imagination lol, i would've never thought of something like this.

Im glad yo had me read this, its excellent. no idea what else to say. its very good.

--TheGothicAlbino

This just made me cry. I love it. I absolutely love the image youve created here, with the innocent teddy and almost justifying everything he does, and still in the end he believes the girl will come back. Thats really beautiful, in a sick way.