Wow! This is beautiful poem, I like the words which you used, they are very symbolic and title caught my attention. This is very emotional piece and you expressed your self through pure poetic power. I truly enjoyed in this piece, repetition is also fantastically done. The shortness of this piece gave it special effect and atmosphere is beautiful, line between stanzas is in my opinion the most powerful one because it represents impressive touch between two vivid pictures. Anyway greatly written.

I must say that I enjoyed this poem. I was abit hesitant to read anything that you might have put up at the moment because you have so many poems.

I think that it's a poem that you should look into deeply. I see that you write a lot of short poems, perhaps you should expand on it?

I'm very happy to have had the chance to read this. 5/5