:'(...its so sad. but i loved it. your writting is so beautiful. dont ever ever stop, you really have talent!

Ten Feet Tall

loved it... was so sad actully made me cry....added u to favorites.....5/5 for sur..

Wow! You are really talented, and this poem was so heartfelt. I started crying while I read it. My sister died of cancer at a young age, so I get really touched by poems like this. Dont ever stop writing :)

Beautiful poem. One suggestion for the last line.
Who die every day

I think it reads slightly better. If you correct some of this
e.g cant=can't
you should repost it into the sad poems. I think it will get more readers.

Really great poem!
I had a friend who died with cancer...
I miss her. But oh well, good job!
-xox-
Anica