Comments : Just another soldier...

  • Wow that bought tears to my eye's very deep you write what u r feeling and what is going on around u. keep up the great work.

  • 15 years ago

    by Kuro

    They work hard to defend us and deserve their place in our hearts for more than just soldiers. they are people too. and it takes a lot of courage to be able to pay that price for our freedom.

    that was his sacrifice to give. grieve for his yes, but also honor what he gave his life for.

    i liked this poem. it reminded me that our soldiers are not invincible and that there is a lot to be sacrificed for our freedom. it also kinda reminded me of my own poem "Picture Perfect". check it out if you like.

    well done, ~Ben