This is a great poem! I loved how deep it is.
I especially love the part:

"But even when you're sad,
Your eyes keep shining on.
Looking beyond the clouds,
Trying to find the sun."

Keep up the good work!

5/5

I think you did such a great job on this poem. It was really short, but it was really sweet. It brought tears to my eyes and it was a job well done.
Melanie =]

Oh, goodness... sounds like something i wish i could hear more often :3 your poem rlli touches d heart of whom you are speaking to...

thank you for posting this, truly. i wish words like these could be nicely phrased more often by every human being in general... caring for and loving someone else is truly a gift to have & shud not be wasted.

Hey right back at you, lol. I used to be on here a lot but for some odd reason for got the email I used to sign up and made a new account.

Nice poem, imo. I usually tend to follow a rhythmic pattern and also a rhyme one. I have never tried writing one like this poem.