Comments : Everyone says I'm a heartbreaker...

  • 15 years ago

    by SIMPLY ME

    Good job

  • 15 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    WOW! This was a great poem. Obviously filled with a mixture of emotions. How people can come up with these labels of others that they don't even know is beyond me.

    Just look once within my eyes,
    What's right and wrong you'll soon realize.
    The importance you have within my life,
    And the inspiration you gave continues to survive.

    ^^^I really loved this stanza. It reallly pulled the entire poem together. A great ending to a wonderful poem. You've still got it girl.
    5/5
    Me