LOVED IT!

Good Job

Wow... that is an amazing poem. so strong and great rhythm. Wow. this one is going in my favorites. 5/5

Sweet!!!! =) 5/5

I liked it. :] Basically the same punctuation thing, and you capitalized a few words that I didn't see why you need to capitalize them.

Other than that it was a pretty good poem. :]

I'll give it a four.

Never say never, hon. Things could easily change. I really like this poem as well. The two poems are different but each is unique and emotional. a good write. good job. 5/5

I... am... copeletely... speechless. I dont know what to tell you. it is so strong and sweet. just.. keep up the amazing work. 5/5 ~KM~