Three things:

1. That's not a poem, that's a monologue

2. It's only an alright monologue, the type delivered at the end of that teenage coming-of-age film that only the girly-girls truly enjoyed and

3. Spelling mistakes kill you in this

Hope for the best
(RKD)

1. theres more than one type of poem. just because it doesn't have the whole rhyming scheme involved doesn't make it any less of a poem.

2. way to place judgement and then tell me what audience it should be delievered to. you're not the audience then its not your place to say if it's only alright.

3. ever think it's not about the way the words are written but the meaning that lies behind them. its not the mistakes rearrange the words making them hard to dephire.

This is incredible. Great emotions and wording i feel like i'm there watching you or whoever the person is!
great poem!! :)