Hullo that is a beautiful poem well written , although a few mistakes it was still very nice , you sounded very sad and sincere, i hope your friend forgave you.Well done

Grant

I can see how deep you are sorry about this, you just remind me of my best friend. i can feel you and i can your friend even more. i just hope she/he will forgive you because i know that you need her/him just as my best friend needs me

good luck my friend...your poem was touching and i hope it touched your friend's heart

Well, Kel...if this does not make your friend change his/ her mind I don't know what will!
We all make mistakes, we are not God:)
A very hearfelt poem, I hope all worked out well for you:)

Hugs from your Dutch friend:)

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