Nice idea but to long I think. Whereas a Haiku is only three lines this should have been only three verses I feel.

Very creative :) How true mircles do need love.
Great job!
Take Care
Cindy

Michael,

I have read this string of verses a few times now and it is just so very beautiful:)
Very unique too and it has been made with so much devotion...it just shines from the page!
Very well done, my friend!

Hugs,

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