Wow. this was very good. i loved it.

Her eyes squeeze shut
As her eyes start to leak
Her hands are shaking but she just can't stop the song

^ very last line, omg it just made the whole poem come together. so deep. i loved this last part.

--aprilsconspiracy

This was an amazing poem. Deep, meaningful, projective of thoughts. it was beautifully written. i can say i can relate to this. you did an amazing job with this.
--lovedroughtmelody