Wow this poem was so sad yet so great. The way you wrote it was simply genius. It was like you explained every detail and emotion that was felt by everyone this poem touched. Truly remarkable. What you've written here was sophisticated and something many can relate to.

Sad as it may be a heart cannot even weep,
It simply breaks down and shatters into fine pieces to keep.
Each time it erupts in an emotion of solitude and sacrifice,
Nothing more left to appease such an appetite.

^^I quite enjoyed this stanza. Many people personify the heart, but you reversed it, very clever. Another beautiful piece, keep it up
5/5 of course =]
~FB~

I agree w/u.. hmm that lines is absolutely great filled w/ so much emotion and deep words... and also this lines was really touch me and it made me think alot

If life could just tell me what it required,
So that I would not associate with the unquiet.
If life could just give me of a glimpse of that which I need,
So that this feeling of uncertainty can never feed.

well that was kinda a great piece and great dedication to everyone. very touchy and full of nice emotions..keep it up

5/5