Where has their hearts been.
It's have and that's a question. :]

I hope that your not superstitious.
you're*

The rhyming was pretty good, though it broke near the end and the stanza format changed, I know you do that, but it's still not as rhythemic to the reader to read even if it is your thing.

It was an all right poem. The concept was fine.

I'll give you a four.

I've been praying.
Since the day I met you
That maybe sometime
I get to love you.

very sweet. i like it. :]

Awww very very sweet

This is beauitful and very sweet. i like it. i shall be reading on.. =) keep it up!

Take care,
Frenchy

I actually really enjoyed this. I could tell it came straight from your heart because your love for this person just shone through. We all have that one person we dream and wish for with all our hearts and would do anything to have them by our side. I think you described that emotion nicely and truly brought it to life for me. I liked the style in which you wrote it because it was different and refreshing to read. Although the stanzas were broken and uneven, I think it flowed nicely.

Well done, very honest poem.
Thank you for sharing.
*5/5*