This is great im so sorry to i understand your pain i really do

1sr stanza line 2 "f" should be "of" and last stanza last line "were" should be "we're"
other then that the poem is great. 5/5

Well done i like it

Wow i love how you craft this beautiful poem. I can see the affection that you have for this person. It was written so simple and straight forward that it enables me to visualize the whole poem throughout.

Excellent Job
5/5 from me