Comments : Lovestruck

  • 11 years ago

    by Mister 47

    The flow of words , just amazing, this with out a doubt deserve to be added to my favorites

    great job

  • 11 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    WOW... the flow was amazing, the rhyming... awsome...

    i loved the last stanza

  • 11 years ago

    by mysterious

    Omg...i just love this pem...full stop...

  • 11 years ago

    by Tamon G

    Your beautiful smile, picture perfect in my mind
    You were always my protector & never unkind
    When lightening struck and we entered a storm
    You would hold me close & you'd keep me warm

    the words and the flow fits the overall mood of the poem very well. Keep up the good work

  • 11 years ago

    by xxXCrazyXNeonXGurlXxx

    Awesome poem i love it soo much

  • 11 years ago

    by *emmax*

    The imagery is vivid and provokes one's mind to "see" the poem come alive.

    A wonderful piece indeed!

  • 11 years ago

    by brokenxheartedxangel

    Amazing!
    My favorite out of all the poems I've read so far!
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Good poem, it really shows how you were feeling at that moment in time. I thinkt hat it was written very quickly because it's just that good.

    When our eyes locked I knew I'd found love
    You were my angel sent to me from above

    Those two lines have been used so many times, especially the ending; which I'm referring to. Love and Above have been rythmed so many times.

    I loved the last Stanza it's really good. I loved that, I read it a few times. Very good lines. I loved it and really appreciated the read.

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Exostosis

    Gosh..u rhyme so good.......all ur poems r great...and dis piece is really cool.....sry im bad at commenting...but good work is always appreciated =)

    peace~

  • 10 years ago

    by Em

    The best ones are always dreamt about. So beautiful yet sad that it's just a dream. Perfect as always though. 5/5, Em