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by Mister 47
The flow of words , just amazing, this with out a doubt deserve to be added to my favoritesgreat job
by Robie Lincer
WOW... the flow was amazing, the rhyming... awsome...
i loved the last stanza
Omg...i just love this pem...full stop...
by Tamon G
Your beautiful smile, picture perfect in my mind
You were always my protector & never unkind
When lightening struck and we entered a storm
You would hold me close & you'd keep me warm
the words and the flow fits the overall mood of the poem very well. Keep up the good work
Awesome poem i love it soo much
The imagery is vivid and provokes one's mind to "see" the poem come alive.
A wonderful piece indeed!
My favorite out of all the poems I've read so far!
by Dark Savior
Good poem, it really shows how you were feeling at that moment in time. I thinkt hat it was written very quickly because it's just that good.
When our eyes locked I knew I'd found love
You were my angel sent to me from above
Those two lines have been used so many times, especially the ending; which I'm referring to. Love and Above have been rythmed so many times.
I loved the last Stanza it's really good. I loved that, I read it a few times. Very good lines. I loved it and really appreciated the read.
Gosh..u rhyme so good.......all ur poems r great...and dis piece is really cool.....sry im bad at commenting...but good work is always appreciated =)
The best ones are always dreamt about. So beautiful yet sad that it's just a dream. Perfect as always though. 5/5, Em