The flow of words , just amazing, this with out a doubt deserve to be added to my favorites

great job

WOW... the flow was amazing, the rhyming... awsome...

i loved the last stanza

Omg...i just love this pem...full stop...

Your beautiful smile, picture perfect in my mind
You were always my protector & never unkind
When lightening struck and we entered a storm
You would hold me close & you'd keep me warm

the words and the flow fits the overall mood of the poem very well. Keep up the good work

Awesome poem i love it soo much

The imagery is vivid and provokes one's mind to "see" the poem come alive.

A wonderful piece indeed!

Amazing!
My favorite out of all the poems I've read so far!
5/5

Good poem, it really shows how you were feeling at that moment in time. I thinkt hat it was written very quickly because it's just that good.

When our eyes locked I knew I'd found love
You were my angel sent to me from above

Those two lines have been used so many times, especially the ending; which I'm referring to. Love and Above have been rythmed so many times.

I loved the last Stanza it's really good. I loved that, I read it a few times. Very good lines. I loved it and really appreciated the read.

5/5

Gosh..u rhyme so good.......all ur poems r great...and dis piece is really cool.....sry im bad at commenting...but good work is always appreciated =)

peace~

The best ones are always dreamt about. So beautiful yet sad that it's just a dream. Perfect as always though. 5/5, Em