I like how you have the repetitive bits at the top of each stanza, it gives it nice flow and makes it feel like youre talking straight to the reader and everything theyre pretending not to be.
5/5

This brought tears to my eyes, Jesse...and left me feeling so very very tired. It's so true, though. You know it well..I hate that you know it so well...someday it'll be better, my dear, we just have to get there..

amazing work, jesse, as always. 5/5

It can be so hard when you feel like you haven't got a friend in the world. This poem is great in the way it expresses the loneliness. I love how it is written as if addressed to the 'others out there' who feel the same. it's as if you're not alone after all.

This is absolutly great it flows very well and i sent a link to this to one of my friends who feels like this and your poem had her thinking and now she is right as rain.
keep up the great work.
5/5