Ingrid,

this is a beautifully discriptive poem. A tribute to someone very special and I must say they certainly sound it.

I love how you finish by being in their arms with the setting sun in its radiant sky..a lovely scene.

well done

Michael

Another soft and sweet poem of yours...

i love the tenderness u have in the way you write...

keep writting ingrid, wish u the best in life :)

Aww your poem was so sweet and loving!! i loved this verse:

"Hair that shines like gold
Eyes that brighten up my darkest day
A smile that lights a thousand candles
Bless the day you came my way" - this is great!!

this poem was so beautifully written, i loved it! great use of worlds, flow was good, great work 5/5!!