Awesome i really like it
it has like the rough true emotion feel
i really do like it

Wow that was a really moving poem i enjoyed it it was very beautiful.

This is a complete opposite type of emotion to the other poem i read-yet still very good.
there were a couple of lines that i felt you just grabbed at a word that rhymed-some last words didnt seem to fit as well as others-but hey-we all do it.

a very sweet embracing poem-good job.

aish
xx

Lol xD

''You make me feel so fruity''

or something. funny line x]

good job though x]