Awesome, this is a very dark poem =]
You have a creative mind ^^
Nice flow too!

Great flow I really liked it. It's dark and kinda creepy in a way. I think it has great emotion and draws the reader in nicely. Great Job.

Rebbeca

Very, very, very dark. lol

You totally proved that you should write stories with this poem. It was very descriptive, and I thought captured a sense of madness. Good work.

Wow girl, this is my fav so far. so dark, so amazing. very captivating