Awwww.... that was beautiful. i loved the emotion and i like how you stated all the pain and hurt but said that you would do it all over again given the chance because its worth it. nice write and a very nice format. love the ryhming. 6/5 ~KM~

Wow, I loved it!!! I really liked the rhyming, it did not seem forced at all....and i really liked the passion that you managed to capture, because that kind of feeling leaves most of us unable to do anything, especially write poems! 5/5

Wow. this one i really really love.
your opening two stanzas, blew me away.
I stare at the ceiling
Sleep avoids me like a mouse avoids a cat
I want to close my eyes
But right now I have no use for that

^^ so many times do i experience this.

Because whenever I embrace the darkness
The soothing cool of night
I see your face, your eyes and your smile
Which sets my heart alight

^^ you worded this beautifully.

This is a great poem, the flow is great and rhyming is good.
you wrote about something that is experienced a lot, but you wrote it so that it was very unique, which is outstanding.

very well done. keep it up.
5/5