Good poem, laden with emotion and pain, 5/5

Wow! its sad but really good!

Wow..i love it cuz its short but cuz its just idk gets the message across...great work..keep it up..5/5

Very emotional but always remeber some may act as if they dont give a care when actually they love you beyond your imagination dont give up hope you have a whole lot to live for GOD BLESS

So simple and yet so powerful...wow!
Really tugs at the heart-strings.

I love this one!! 5/5

This is sad I know just how you feel!

Awesome poem!..keep it up. :)

Simple yet to the point. great expression. if you ever need someone to talk to just pm me. it sucks when you think no one cares. i can relate.
but good job. =]

I really liked this. I would change the last line to "Everything starts to fade" Anyways i like how simple this is. I can relate to wanting to escape from the voices in your head. Very intense poem. Keep it up. Nik

Another good write lol. Good rhyming... great flow... so deep. Well written and expressed.

Take care,

Olwin.

Wow, I like how short yet very deep this poem is. The flow, style and rhyme of the piece went really well together. 5/5. Em x

HA! i love this so much!!!!

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I like the way it rhymed and its rythmn was superb!!!!!!!!!!!

>>>>keep up the good job!!!

~midz

Lovely ..Maybe I should give up and end this fight

:)
brilliant work Matt ..
5/5
Biya

Too short , but meaningful & contains hundred feelings .
One more awsome job , i congratulate u
5/5 really excellent

AWESOME!!!!

Very short and down to the point. I like it.

Very short and down to the point. I like it.

Very short and down to the point. I like it.

Very short and down to the point. I like it.