Psh. Sean, don't say that. I like this particular poem with it's chain of thoughts non-stop. You captured the flow of thought very well.
Aken Sol

*searches desperately for a grammetical or spelling error*

Damn! Nice work tough guy, thats you on my hit list [favs] Someone who actually things about the words and the way they are laid out, impressive in here. Yeah, i've checked out and commented on Aken Sol' stuff [ hello ].

I'll be watching you.

i can tell your the type of person who cares about humanity, and who doesn't want the world to amount to anything other than "perfect". And for that you get my respect. Two thumbs up on that one. If you want to read a poem that is quite indecisive, read mine called final destination, or burning sensation.

The last part was my FAVOURITE part!! i loved this poem!!

very very very very very very very very very very brilliant poem!!! it sends your point across so clearly, absolutely great stuff! it was so cool at the end with the SCREAM going down, very interesting and great wording all throughtout it, tops stuff!