Excellent poem Michael very well written and such a difficult (for me anyway) form.
Very well done

Grant

You are so skillful Michael what becomes to writing. It is very artistic. You really have developed your own unique style to write.

Excellent work. :)

How very beautiful, dear Michael:)
Your words ring so true and the format gives it such an elegant twist.
Now, don't you ever tell me again you feel uncertain about your work, silly you, ha ha ha!
You rock, Michael Moran!

Hugs,

Michael
This piece contains such deep emotion. Excellent imagery and word choices.

Alone, with nothing left, cold and alone,
Yet, surviving..still, just surviving yet.
Will of iron won't melt, it never will.
Pain of recall, shreds hope, leaving just pain.

It always amazes me what things humans can survive through. Things we never think we could make ever endure. This cuts to the core. Your talent is shining dear Poet.
Excellent job!
Take Care
Cindy

Gorgeous poem. It was very well written. I can't give you a smart answer about the technique ( I really know nothing about poetry), but I can say that this was just beautiful. It simply sounded right when I read it.
Stunning job!
~Kayla

This was really powerful and filled with dark emotions, it amazes me how good your talent with words are. you write so well and your poems are very interesting all the way through. thankyou for sharing these. xx