Oh my. i love the emotion in it. i love how at the end you ask someone to not let you fall. it is wonderful. KM

I think this was probably the best out of the three I've read today. However, you didn't really have my attention fully throughout the whole poem again. It was kind of plain, the emotions weren't really there, I don't know. Needs improment. I think it could definatly be longer as well, that will help you express feelings and emotions much easier. 4/5.