I really liked this. If a guy wrote me this, he would DEFINITELY be getting brownie points!

'Who is the girl that I call my own?
a vision that's risen from loveliness sown'.
"Beauty so perfect and hair so fine'.

perfection is just an illusion. For onetime the physic counts for a guy, normally most guys says beauty comes from the heart.
I love this poem because most women like being attired for their man.